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This is a Love Story,
She is in love with him,
He is the cold Mr. Winter,
She is the warm Ms. Spring,
They are too far, and too close.

She Cant be with him,
If she get close she becomes Autumn and dies,
that's why she'll never tell his feelings and
her tears becomes rain all the year.

She never lose her hopes
and makes every year beautiful flowers for him
But they always die before he can take a look at it.

She only wants to be with him,
Trying to make it possible, but
is it worth even if is not?

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xD Yaaay~ I've been thinking this art too much time and i finally did it! :D
This is the 50% of the pic, Tool: SAI + CS3 + wacom
Hope you like it.



[Edited] I edited the txt, sorry, my English is not that good xD.

Critiques


:iconsali-chan:
Of all the pieces in your gallery, this is definitely the best. It is evident that you have also spent a great deal of time on it, as it has a significant amount of beautifully intricate detail, such as on the hair strands and flower corsage.

You have made good use of Photoshop (?) brushes for the backgrounds and textures. The polarity of the two characters is thoughtfully conveyed, both in the composition and the colour scheme. The autumnal warmth of the blushing girl juxtaposed against the wintry stoicism of her lover works wonderfully. The anatomy of the two characters is pretty good - I particularly like the position of her hand resting on his cheek; it looks delicate and intimate. A red rose and scarf bring the picture together excellently; I think this is an original and intelligent addition.

If I were to make improvements to this myself I would change the position of the leaves on the left-hand side so that they swirl around the figure rather than drift downward through the air; this would be more atmospheric, in my opinion. Something about the female's head seems a little off; the placement of the eyes would be further forward so that the tears would perhaps be rolling down differently. The nose and mouth seem disproportionately tiny on the face and her chin seems too large.

Other than those minor criticisms, I think this is just lovely. You should be very proud of this piece!
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:iconcanarycharm:
aw, such a pitiful love story...

--
wannabe singer :P
:iconjenbluemint:
:batman: KAWAIIII!!!!!!!
Jenny approves : DDDD!!!
The hair, the details in the rose, the background,
all goes in harmony <3333!! Fave n_n!!
:iconnoroone:
You see, you depress me! ):

--
"Shut up, and look at me. I'm just a stranger.
What made you think you knew me?"

"I need new voices in my head,
to speak my secret evils with.
I need new lovers in my bed,
to be my friends and Special Pets."
:iconkurohane:
Que lindo trabajo (me pasé por tu página principal y me dí cuenta que hablas español = D )
Me gusta mucho los colores que utilizaste, y la textura que tienen... además de que el concepto es muy lindo, aunque algo triste...

Gran trabajo!

--
~*Hagane no Kokoro*~
-+"Time served on the earth doesnt mean you grow in mind"+-
:iconsabaku-no-hana:
aww muchas gracias =DDD

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